Thursday, January 12, 2006

Coarse Goodbye Comments

Rating: 4.5

there are times i can
think of nothing but you
though it's obvious
your love was far from true
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Faith Elizabeth Brigham
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Hugh Cobb 13 January 2006

Good write, Faith. The perspective of the woman scorned is not one to be ignored! And though you say you rise above spite, the last wish might just bely that. The poem has emotion a-plenty and much to say. It is well-written and makes the point succinctly and distinctly. Hugh

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Faith Elizabeth Brigham

Faith Elizabeth Brigham

Pittsburgh, PA
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