Tuesday, July 4, 2017

Coal Comments

Rating: 5.0

Nature!
Don't make me so much hard.
I don't want to become diamond.
Let me remain coal.
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Loke Kok Yee 05 July 2017

To continue in the cycle of life rather than a dead expensive stone, surely the better choice. You said it well. Thank you sir.

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Jazib Kamalvi 04 July 2017

A great return with a great poem on cycle of life. Thanks

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Valsa George 04 July 2017

The desire to become a garland of smiling flowers is a humble desire.....! Let it be a garland of 'pink' roses... your favorite color!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 04 July 2017

Sun helps coal to turn in to carbohydrates. Green plants and trees utilize this. In garland of flowers this looks so pretty while converted to diamond and placed in necklace. Flower gives fragrance. Beautifully and naturally narrated poem is shared here with much care...10

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