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Ah que mi amigo Luis, quien no quiere ser mujer si es lo mas lindo del mundo :) No es facil la vida pero es rica en lo que mas importa, tenemos amor y valor de sobra haha. Dejando a un lado mis sentimientos como mujer, es un buen poema ;) Gracias por compartir como siempre de tu talento.

nice poem Luis...i liked the beautiful way of presentation of your concept there...10

This is a very interesting poem... i liked it, and thank-you for reading and commenting my poem.

I liked it...............10

I agree to both Phumudzo and john, your poem rocks as gold Luis. Nice write. Another 10 for you.

Another beautiful one. You rock

wow the last stanza is gold luis.

I Love your poem Luis... I could picture the scene in my mind, always a good sign of a well written poem...10