Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
Monday, October 6, 2008

Clowns Comments

Rating: 4.3

~ Clowns


Three rings were in my circus,
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Adeline Foster
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Chuck Audette 09 January 2012

The three rings... Hmm... Maybe... Engagement ring, wedding ring and suffer-ring? Like your little ditty! -chuck

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Stefanie Fontker 19 October 2011

Hmm, this one I really like. Mystical, in such a serene fashion.

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Paul Henry Dallaire 20 December 2008

Now that is a nice poem Ad. I couldn't help but laugh a little, a clowns job right. It's not Timmons it's Timmins (Shania Twains home town) . Right now this morning it's 35 below but were tough ha ha. Paul. I can see why you never came back he he.

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David Threadgold 21 October 2008

I like the three rings in your circus. and the double meaning. a very pleasant read thanks. Regards Dave T

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Sathyanarayana M V S 17 October 2008

last two lines are enigmatic. I didn't get! !

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Ron Flowers 16 October 2008

A good write. Ron

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Elizabeth England 06 October 2008

How is it we are alike?

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Adeline Foster

Adeline Foster

Instructor of poetry, Hagerstown, MD
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