Saturday, August 5, 2006

Clown Comments

Rating: 5.0

If I make faces and paste a smile,
will you forget originality
and mimic my style?
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Lynne RBC
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Brian Dorn 17 August 2006

Lynne, some people are difficult to please, even with acrobatics and a clown suit. But, you've certainly made the effort. Great write! ! Brian

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Francesca Johnson 05 August 2006

This leaves me with the impression of someone talking to a child who has been injured, and is in pain. I suppose you could put all sorts of interpretations to this one, Lynne. Leaves the reader to make up his / her own mind. Love, Fran xx

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