Mirrored
craggful face
of hagful mouth,
yawning
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You're not clowning around. Nothing positive said, about clowns I agree, they are a parody of reality. Written with force and poetic conviction
Upsetting portrait of a pathetic clown- not the way we like to think of clowns: but the poem exposes something depressing about the whole identity. Profound for a clown.
Behind the mask is sadness. Thanks for your interest. Sally.