Saturday, March 9, 2019

Clown Comments

Rating: 5.0

Mirrored
craggful face
of hagful mouth,
yawning
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Julia Luber 09 March 2019

Upsetting portrait of a pathetic clown- not the way we like to think of clowns: but the poem exposes something depressing about the whole identity. Profound for a clown.

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Sally PP. 27 March 2019

Behind the mask is sadness. Thanks for your interest. Sally.

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Sandra Feldman 09 March 2019

You're not clowning around. Nothing positive said, about clowns I agree, they are a parody of reality. Written with force and poetic conviction

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Sally P. P. 27 March 2019

The mask is a front worn by sadness. Best regards. Sally

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