Cloudy Thoughts Comments
At times I feel
Thoughts are clouds
That gather instantly
In the sky of life.
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comparison of thoughts with that of cloud is more appropriate. Both have the same functions. +++++10
This is a brilliant metaphor and you expressed it so well through your poems. Amazing.
A Very striking presentation of a mental state when thoughts cloud around and vision is obscured! Great write!
Indeed, that's a true picture of what it is, we do hope that we may get the clear picture so that we may write the best stuff, good 1 dear, I invite you to read and rate mine.
Wonderful feeling you have shared here. Like clouds, thoughts become too cloudy to make rain of emotion in wonderful poems. Clarity of memories keep on flashing reaching life ahead. A fantastic poem shared here. Very wise and nice sharing...10
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8/16/2025 9:14:58 PM # 1.0.0
Wonderful metaphor. Enjoyed the poem and last lines of optimism very much.