Tuesday, January 23, 2018

Clouds (With Thanks To Elizabeth Ongpauco Whose Poem Clouds On The Lake Inspired Me To Write This Poem) Comments

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The clouds noted with regret,
they are here but the lake is thirsty.
"Here I can be empty
but I can't see you empty.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 January 2018

you will be no more thirsty. I shall rise then again. I'll go back there where a thirsty lake would be waiting for me. You call me clouds.....scintillating poetic imagination...an excellent poem with neat expression! Loved reading it...10

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Loke Kok Yee 23 January 2018

At the end, you linked the clouds to love. Happily you took me through the clouds, then in just one line you showered me with love, you are indeed in a class of your own. Thank you sir.

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Khalida Bano Ali 23 January 2018

You call me clouds In fact I am a cycle of love. Beautiful.

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Seema Chowdhury 23 January 2018

Beautifully expressed, very inspiring write. Thank you for sharing. Thank you for leaving nice comments on my poems. have a blessed day.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 January 2018

A truly amazing piece about nature. You captured so beautifully the unique attributes of cloud. Exceptional write.10

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