Friday, September 12, 2008

Clouds That Feel Sore Comments

Rating: 5.0

Clouds that feel sore
With a hot rain they pour
I wonder are they real!
Are they made of steel!
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miss lavender
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Ashraful Musaddeq 04 October 2008

A nice poem with nice imagery. 'A bird is flying around With no limits to be bound What a land would it be To land on and feel free' Wonderful.10+

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Sarwar Chowdhury 23 September 2008

a fine composition indeed.............10

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Dr.subhendu Kar 20 September 2008

that happen to happen by the warmth rain still fluffs by the shadow of the clouds birds roars high by fledging of wings and the sky is the limit if their freedom...............excellent trhought in undertone by the imagery, i do enjoy,10+, thanks for sharing

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Ashraful Musaddeq 14 September 2008

Very nice poem, enjoyed it.

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Emily Oldham 13 September 2008

Makes me feel free. Very inspiring. Love it! Thanks :) Athena xx

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<font color =fusha>Amy 13 September 2008

Great poem, teaches everryone that inspiration is all around us, we just have to look at the simple things in life to realise it- great write, keep smiling :)

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