Thursday, August 13, 2009

Clouds That Come And Go Comments

Rating: 5.0

Clouds that come and go
Untold divine missions do
They carry out, without pause or falter
They our fates can certainly alter.
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Rani Turton
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Fay Slimm 13 August 2009

A fine assessment of the work of clouds Rani and the surprise ending was a real treasure which wound up the verse so very poignantly. best wishes from Fay with a 10 plus.......

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Daniel Kempson 13 August 2009

That was a beautiful poem enjoyed it thank you Daniel

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