Clouds - Tanka Comments

I call your dark clouds as metaphor. This Tanka is technically perfect and thoroughly poetic with social implications. A brilliant write. Top score.

Indeed, the dark clouds are every depressing! Vivid and apt Tanka

Aptly defined the King Cobra, Liked the metaphor.5***

A beautiful day gone bad is described here so vividly.5 stars!

Create a mournful day.....significant....thank u.

Very heart moving, very powerfully painted and expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

I love this poem Rose Marie! Fantastic work!