The heavy clouds build up once more
Accumulating vast array
These clouds turn up the temperature
Building pressure hour by hour
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Excellent poem Frank, Deep emotion, great imagery. Your a compassionate writer. This was sad at the end. Take care.
This is a delightful read Frank, a lovely flow of words and a wonderfully constructed poem with a lovely story to tell. Loved it. Love Ernestine XXX
I love this poem Frank, it speaks so passionately of your love for Africa. The imagery you use is second to none..... and at the end, though sad, it resonates. A lovely poem. HG: -) xx