Confessions of Krishna - 10
Oh, golden twilight clouds,
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Congratulations, Prem. This poem is selected POEM OF THE DAY- MEMBERS today. An occasion for revisit
Reading this lovely worded poem about Lord Krishna and his beloved Radha is a pleasure. Thank you so much for sharing this wonderful poem, so many people have a different belief, I belief in Jesus Christ, but I can appreciate this woderous poem about the love of two Gods
I can't express in words how much do I love this endearing poem. I appreciate your fascinating expression tinged with fervour, 'Let her know how sad I feel In this world so unreal In this suffocating silence'. Top score for this poem.
Thank you very much for the exhilarating expression. Your words really touched my heart.
Excellent work, C N! I love the flow and it transmits the emotion!
Radha and Krisna's love represent both worldly and other worldly love.It is no wonder that their names are always uttered together with most reverence by all writers, poets, philosophers, devotees and lovers.Your poem is really wonderful poem.If find time please visit my blog Bharatispen and read the poem COME BACK KRISNA
Mera paigham muhabbat hay Jahan tak pahunche (My message is love Where ever it can raech....................Jigar Muradabadi) Besides liking this wonderful poem, I also liked the informative poet's note............10
Long days after hear it's resounding the Sanskrit legendary poet MAHAKAVI Kalidash's voice once again from 'KUMARSAMVABAM Kabbya. Imagery and expression perhaps resounding nearest to that classical poetic essence. May it be poet inspired by Indian classical treasure! There in 'Kumarsamvabam', Jakshya, the hero in confinement, sending his messages imagining cloud as his carrier from the top of Ramgiri hills, for his beloved Kanta who stayed long...long away from him. Just it echoes while reading this very poem. In another sense poet has tried much to illustrate Krishna-Radha relation from Baisnav philosophy by rhyme. Well it works. Thank you.
Hi Pranabda, it is not Kumarasambhavam you are referring to. It is actually Meghasandesham. It is in Megha… that Yaksha sends message through Clouds to his estranged wife…
Full of feeling and pregnant with passion. Well done my friend!
a beautiful well written poem let the lightning in my heart spread around the horizon
Wow. wonderful poem on love.. Beautiful way you have presented it. Loved it. +++ 10
Carry the vapors of tears From my eyes as your clouds of blue Let the thunders in my heart What the amazing verses.Very strong with fantastic fashion.my vote is 9.Well done! ! ! ! !
Beautiful poetic expressions with crystalline images.A well crafted poem of love.