Friday, December 15, 2017

Clouds In The Desert Comments

Rating: 5.0

When we look at the world,
it seems we live in a desert:
heat of loneliness, of greed
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Yiyan Han 20 January 2018

Wonderful and meaningful Yes, let turn the desert into oasis

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David Wood 05 January 2018

It reminds me when I was in the Negev desert it rained and all the desert flowers came out. Lovely poem brought back memories.10.

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Unwritten Soul 25 December 2017

Wonderful like you always share...tenderness is part of your poem i must say that! :)

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Valsa George 17 December 2017

Let the rain of love and compassion fall down in torrents to make our arid land once more fertile! A poem so positive showering down a lot of positive energy! A 10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 December 2017

Aufie, such a brilliant write..10+++

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Laurie Van Der Hart 15 December 2017

This is a beautiful sustained metaphor, Aufie! It's true - those clouds are there and nothing can stop them from raining down. We shall indeed enjoy a garden of happiness.

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