Clouds At The Murree Hills Comments
I saw you from the plains how dense you appeared,
I fell in love with you, rushed for you at the hills,
Though affected vision but your density disappeared,
Naughty clouds! You transferred to us all your chills!
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Cuts and curves of nature are now in my arms, Where from eyes start kissing, charms only charms! ..........oh, so touching....charm only charm. What a beautiful poem!
Having been here in PH for almost 550 poems half UN-commented.. I feel one should be within first 500 living Poets who alone are read and commented...So I feel I need a sabbatical... no one will comment on the ilks of me Do you Sir agree. You also have abandoned me I wonder even if you have time to read comments on lovely poetry of thine I don't any thanks or encouragement now find find
What a wonderful nature write. It expresses in beautiful detail the beauty and wonders of clouds. Elegantly crafted and well executed.10++++
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7/27/2025 2:41:41 PM # 1.0.0
Wonderfully worded work. So captivating a composition! Well done my friend Akhtar! 10/10