Clouds At The Murree Hills Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Clouds At The Murree Hills

Rating: 5.0


I saw you from the plains how dense you appeared,
I fell in love with you, rushed for you at the hills,
Though affected vision but your density disappeared,
Naughty clouds! You transferred to us all your chills!
I never knew such a chill can make anyone too hot,
Everyone looks warmed up, everyone got what I got.

Thanks for your rainy invitation, with me a dance,
I shall carry the touches of your silken dress with me,
I shall acknowledge your beauty and your romance,
All that I see and that you'll hide and I shall not see.
Earth and rocks, green leaves red flowers, all are wet,
A floor of dancing clouds, for a song the stage is set,

Beauty is supported by the music of cool mild rains,
Clouds, what a semitransparent dress you are here,
Billionaire of light years how her youth she maintains
What I could just only imagine below from there,
Cuts and curves of nature are now in my arms,
Where from eyes start kissing, charms only charms!

Having entered in your soft dressing sweetheart
Whatever I can see I can see an exciting work of art.
In whispers are planning a naught, eyes and the heart.
Let us kiss each other all we have, part by part,
You're exposed I can see, though vision a little blurred,
How with a multicolor rainbow the jealous sun interfered.

Clouds At The Murree Hills
Saturday, August 18, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: cloud,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 18 August 2018

A beautiful love poem for clouds.

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Rini Shibu 18 August 2018

Beautiful poem akhtarji and lovely couples

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Khalida Bano Ali 18 August 2018

How beautifully the nature has been personified!

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Howard Simon 21 August 2018

Wonderfully worded work. So captivating a composition! Well done my friend Akhtar! 10/10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 August 2018

Cuts and curves of nature are now in my arms, Where from eyes start kissing, charms only charms! ..........oh, so touching....charm only charm. What a beautiful poem!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 August 2018

Salaams to Begum Sahebaaan Ma'am

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 19 August 2018

Having been here in PH for almost 550 poems half UN-commented.. I feel one should be within first 500 living Poets who alone are read and commented...So I feel I need a sabbatical... no one will comment on the ilks of me Do you Sir agree. You also have abandoned me I wonder even if you have time to read comments on lovely poetry of thine I don't any thanks or encouragement now find find

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 August 2018

What a wonderful nature write. It expresses in beautiful detail the beauty and wonders of clouds. Elegantly crafted and well executed.10++++

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