Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Tuesday, February 16, 2010

Clouds And Moon Comments

Rating: 4.6

Moon is easy love object and sought after
Can be seen so beautifully reflected even in water
He is calm with all his expressions and remains cool
Silver rays and pure love can’t make anybody fool
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 05 September 2010

Moon is easy love object and sought after Can be seen so beautifully reflected even in water

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Adam Reed 23 February 2010

fantastic man! this is one of my favorites! ! !

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Antonio Liao 18 February 2010

Superb imagery of elements of power....I do like reading and I post in my office table for day to day...reflection...God blesses...a 10 +++++

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Leonard Dabydeen 17 February 2010

An intense adoration for the moon (gender notwithstanding) . Good write. Blessings. Leonard

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Kevin Maroney 17 February 2010

I am not sure as to the meaning of this poem. It seems to me it is saying that you should not judge a lover based on their looks, but rather their personality or wisdom (covering the face with darkness) , but I'm not sure what else there might be. As Andrew already said, could you perhaps shed some light?

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Andrew Moss 16 February 2010

Very nice poem, it has a very nice rhythm. I was intrigued by the fact that you refer to the moon as a he repeatedly, when in many cultures the moon is seen as a female entity, perhaps you could shed some light?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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