Sunday, June 21, 2009

Clouds And Me Comments

Rating: 4.4

I watched the clouds
and it watch me too,
I talked to him but gently flow
he waves farewell in my head above,
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Susan T. Aparejo
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Nikunj Sharma 10 July 2009

Susan...this poem is excellent.simple words and deep meanings...keep it up...read my poem called an ode for the rain...

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Sameer Ahmed 30 June 2009

The imagery well illuminated and the imaginative bondage between you and the cotton wool like beautiful clouds is a picturesque. The beauty is well deified in this poem that shows your love for scenics.....10/10

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Rommel Mark Marchan 26 June 2009

cloud talking is mostly done by mortal being aspiring to be like a feathery clouds travelling to infinity man by nature is always seeking answers for his unanswerable journey of tranquility

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 22 June 2009

The scenical touch in this spontaneous chit-chat with clouds is splendid. A wishful comparison between a cloud and the first person singular of this poem has been described nicely through this charming write. Best Wishes Naseer

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Susan T. Aparejo

Susan T. Aparejo

Gingoog City, Philippines
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