I watched the clouds
and it watch me too,
I talked to him but gently flow
he waves farewell in my head above,
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The imagery well illuminated and the imaginative bondage between you and the cotton wool like beautiful clouds is a picturesque. The beauty is well deified in this poem that shows your love for scenics.....10/10
cloud talking is mostly done by mortal being aspiring to be like a feathery clouds travelling to infinity man by nature is always seeking answers for his unanswerable journey of tranquility
The scenical touch in this spontaneous chit-chat with clouds is splendid. A wishful comparison between a cloud and the first person singular of this poem has been described nicely through this charming write. Best Wishes Naseer
Susan...this poem is excellent.simple words and deep meanings...keep it up...read my poem called an ode for the rain...