Clouds Amazing Comments

lol..you know most people make wishes on stars..i made mine on clouds..love this..lovely

Amazing! :) U made me to visualize too :) brought me childhood memories :)

What a delight! ! ! This is simply amazing... The entire poem flowed wonderfully with it's calmness and beauty. A marvelous imagery was shown that made it just perfect. God bless you! ! ! -Pink Butterfly-

Hi Nadia, I really enjoy this poem I haven't come across many poems on clouds! But after reading this it makes me wonder why not? You obviously enjoy writing verse and this comes across so vividly in this excellent poem. I look forward to reading more of your stuff, keep it up.

I really like this one because it shows your ability with words and it doesn't seem like you try to rhyme but it comes more naturally to this poem and it's imagery and the way how the beggining seems to have a different situation then what is later revealed

Great use of metaphors for a rarely used theme. Words flow well and help with the imagery. Creates a need to re-read the piece. Excellent.

This was a nice contrast of man made beaty and the beauty of nature. Very enjoyable and some wonderful imagery. Smiles Gypsy

Good imagination, nice flow and sequence of lovable moments.

I love the idea of the ice cream man. Youhave a good imagination

AWESOME! It gives that Christmas feeling.: D