Sunday, December 10, 2017

Clouds, A Hindi Poem By Pushpa P. Parjiea In English Translation Comments

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Somewhere they're spreading their wings,
Somewhere they're running around,
Somewhere they look like poor holy men
Standing still in deep meditation.
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Ravi Kopra 15 January 2018

Thanks for stopping by, for your comment and questions. Pushpa is on poemhunter. Warning was a typo. My translation is not parallel to the original poem in Hindi. I added GOP, the US republican party for emphasis.

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Bri Edwards 14 January 2018

thanks for the Poet's Notes! bri :)

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Bri Edwards 14 January 2018

i like the poem (translation) . is Pushpa P. Parjiea on PH, i wonder. i have questions about these: hot out there from the global warning. .................would you like to change to global warming? They will die and so will we with the GOP.....do you mean the G.O.P. aka the U.S. Republican Party? without clouds, without shades, without rains....shades is ok, but i'd use shade (i think): maybe not. to MyPoemList. bri

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Pushpa P Parjiea 11 December 2017

thanks alott mr. ravi kopra ji

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Ravi Kopra 10 December 2017

Thank you Robert. The poem needed a lot of editing and spell check.

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