Clouds in the sky on the deep blue horizon,
Sail in the wind and are lit by the sun,
As white as the snowfall that lies on the mountains,
Changing and moving like avalanche run.
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You have made the skies dance to your rhythm and rhyme in this poem Andrew! A most splendid read! ! *10*! Best regards! Friend Thad
Another lovely descriptive piece. You are an excellent imagist. Warm regards, Sandra
All the emotion and colours shown, makes a very strong piece of work again from you Andrew Admirable work Love duncan X
You have certainly depicted clouds so excellently in this write, joining all the elements together with great skill. Another poem of distinction. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX
This is one of your best, Andrew. The repetition of the first line in each stanza and the imaginative way you vary the rhythm pattern of each verse adds to the poem's impact. Of course your subject matter is truly the stuff of poetry and you have handled it most eloquently. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
A capturing dance of clouds of different hues and shapes. Very well penned. CP
Clouds are wonderful, nature at its best watching clouds roll on by, great imagery in this, as in all your poetry, 10 Lynda xxx
I enjoyed this very much and liked especially how you ended this with a rainbow... You have as always outdid yourself with your poetic talent to bring nature to a canvas of many colours..... Bonnie