Sunday, February 1, 2009

Clouds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Clouds in the sky on the deep blue horizon,
Sail in the wind and are lit by the sun,
As white as the snowfall that lies on the mountains,
Changing and moving like avalanche run.
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ANDREW BLAKEMORE
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Bonnie Collins 15 February 2009

I enjoyed this very much and liked especially how you ended this with a rainbow... You have as always outdid yourself with your poetic talent to bring nature to a canvas of many colours..... Bonnie

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Reihaneh Jalalian 10 February 2009

it was amazing. i liked it so much. beautiful poem.10

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Thad Wilk 09 February 2009

You have made the skies dance to your rhythm and rhyme in this poem Andrew! A most splendid read! ! *10*! Best regards! Friend Thad

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Sandra Fowler 09 February 2009

Another lovely descriptive piece. You are an excellent imagist. Warm regards, Sandra

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Duncan Wyllie 09 February 2009

All the emotion and colours shown, makes a very strong piece of work again from you Andrew Admirable work Love duncan X

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Ernestine Northover 09 February 2009

You have certainly depicted clouds so excellently in this write, joining all the elements together with great skill. Another poem of distinction. Love and hugs Ernestine XXX

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Alison Cassidy 07 February 2009

This is one of your best, Andrew. The repetition of the first line in each stanza and the imaginative way you vary the rhythm pattern of each verse adds to the poem's impact. Of course your subject matter is truly the stuff of poetry and you have handled it most eloquently. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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C. P. Sharma 05 February 2009

A capturing dance of clouds of different hues and shapes. Very well penned. CP

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Lynda Robson 02 February 2009

Clouds are wonderful, nature at its best watching clouds roll on by, great imagery in this, as in all your poetry, 10 Lynda xxx

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