Thursday, October 11, 2012

Clouds Comments

Rating: 4.2

How strange,
The clouds derange,
My peaceful day,
Intensive gray,
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Sandra Feldman
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Bri Edwards 13 November 2012

i like this but check out your spelling of they are/they're in last stanza. and what do you think about changing last line to like certainly we will be? thanks for sharing. bri edwards

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Marilyn Lott 24 October 2012

Very nice, Sandra. I also have a poem with the same title. I take pictures of them all the time. So amazing they are. Hugs

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