Saturday, July 15, 2017

Cloudburst Comments

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There is a quiet place
Where only golden spirits do the speaking;
Till gentle thunder rolls in from distant clouds,
Then, by and by, the first rain drops fall;
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Bill Galvin
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Seamus O Brian 04 August 2017

Entrancing visual journey, Bill! ! Each stanza felt like a window display, each word skillfully chosen to create a visual impression with impact. I love the rain, and enjoy experiencing the approach and power of the thunderstorms. You have re-created that refreshingly here in a very enjoyable piece of gifted writing. Bravo, Bill! ! :) S

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Bill Galvin

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