Cloudburst Comments

Ancient wells, church bells, Sounds echoing across the lonely fells, With my endless tears of loss, Your words flow like the rivers of past times, Caressing, mystical chimes, Whispers rebounding, over the wind blown ocean, ......touching and impressive expression. It reveals the pain of a heart. Beautifully painted on nature. Lovely one. Thanks for sharing.10

I have never been to that country and never stepped foot in that countryside but that has changed now. While reading this lovely, achingly lovely poem, I experienced this place you saw through the window. Hills, valleys slumbering in the mystique, Of the midday sun, Ancient wells, church bells, Sounds echoing across the lonely fells, - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - ] I melted into that view slumbering in the mystique- a phrase that rivals any phrase written by any literary giant. Oh, and the repeating rhymes of wells, bells, and lonely fells- writing does not get better than this. The least I can do is give it a 10 on that scale below- -but I wish I could give it a million stars.

You ended our relationship, with accusing words, On your lips, A cloudburst of endless reasons, Even in a sunny season! A poem in a lovely style, description of painful memories of a broken love................10

a poem..that swiftly flows through rivers...clouds...churches....n so on...composed beautifully......

A clouderburst in your poem.... lovly write...

So full of emotion.trying to catch something that's gone. Beautifully written. Mohabeer Beeharry

Very touching poem. Emotions very beautifully portrayed..Memories never pass away especially if it was deeply hurt...Beautiful poem.Loved it, Hazel..

This painted an entire picture for me. You couldn't have said it better in a whole book Hazel! ! ! ~mye3 poet

This painted an entire picture for me. You couldn't have said it better in a whole book Hazel! ! ! ~mye3 poet

I liked the creation of an aura by the words.... Awesome

It sings of bitter-sweet memories of life. Memories are candles that flicker on the winds of time but never pass away, ....very emotional and romantic, Hazel

Nice poem Hazel... It flowed nicely. It's sad when a relationship ends, hope things are better for you.: -) ~Karen

Some beautiful lines here Hazel - desires floating on a garland of flowers, lovely!

Memories of you, like opening a window to a view, Always so new - - - - - - - - very good rhyming and good sense

Cats and dogs rain flooded, over river flood plain Clouds are spreading with, firing through the sky, again and again- very good work Hazel....

nice poem with the most suitable title...a great write..superb..do read my some of the poems and do comment on them...

Nice work! Also an interesting title :)