Cloudburst Comments

a very good haiku...liked it immensely

Jacquie, always able to capture life’s true moments. A question for you, what would you put in your Arc?

Wow! Such power and depth in only 3 lines - very well written.

Can feel the loss in this very nice haiku. Wish you lots of strength

loading up hammers, nails, and boards to send you! short, and powerful! good poem!

So much said, with few words...brilliant write...truly captivating. :)

After every heavy storm, the sun come out again.i hope you find peace in you heart one day & just thank God He made you meet such a remarkable person like D in your life...though he's gone but he'll live forever in your heart Jacqueline...!

Yes it is a good poem by J on D. What about me dear Jacqui.... at-least Speak about your harry.......Just for fun ha! ha! ha! 10+++++++ rating! Miss you.......................

What a fantastic haiku. Thanks for sharing.

I wish the sun, peeps in from the raining clouds and you become lucky and witness the rainbow.. Take care :)