Wednesday, October 23, 2013

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To take a long breath
I lift my tuckered face
Suddenly I see a piece of cloud
Moving slowly towards west
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Yasmin Khan 24 October 2013

A nice metaphorical write with a message......

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Wahab Abdul 24 October 2013

here there is nothing about ''the east or the west '', ''moving to west '' is metaphorical which means to fade away, die down, disappear.....with time....the very common sight of our pain, sorrow, suffering, even our dream.. thanks for comment...

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