Sunday, July 19, 2009

Cloud’s Sibling Comments

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No longer able to bear her watery babe in
The slow and heavy bellied Cloud is eager
To be delivered of the Rain
But finds herself helpless
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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri
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Carol Gall 08 October 2009

lovely poem descriptive words 10

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Marta Mehrpouyan 19 July 2009

Beautiful and well written poem. I found the personalization of the elements excellent. As you seem to I too love the rain, but never saw it as a the progeny of clouds before. Great take on it!

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AtreyaSarma Uppaluri

AtreyaSarma Uppaluri

Hyderabad, AP, India
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