Cloud Of Tears (C) 10-1-09 Comments

Depression....Death.....Hate......Love broken....Is what I am.....and this poem describes me.....You MAY understand me.

What a great image: tears forming a cloud and the thunder from it giving an expression to your anger, I think you are expressing in this poem a discovery of a great wisdom, not to express anger until it is gone. I agree witht the WOW's from earlier comments on this poem. It is a great piece.

great poem, i can feel the different emotions behind it all :)

Great poem. I love how your emotions are varying, I vote 10

This is more what I was expecting after reading your Bio. I enjoyed this so much more than the fragmented, crude, aggressive pieces I read before. I like the honesty here, the others seemed to feel more like hiding, putting up an angry front to keep people out. Very nice. Regards, Em Jay

wow....that was.....um....WOW. I give it a 10 all the way.

This is definately a well written piece. you captured your audience through the creative flow you've presented. loved it

Hi Corey, that's right let God take the pains away in your heart. I love your poem.. Thanks and regards.

I truly enjoyed reading this. Beautiful. It has so much emotion in. And I would just like to say to anyone out there who may be feeling these pains, there is hope. There is a light at the end of the tunnel... just keep walking forward towards is

i like this one..... many emotions in this one.

This poem is a master piece.

amazing, a perfect picture of emotions 110% No Reason To care

Real outpour of emotions! But remember u always have another chance to prove yourself! nicely written verses...