Sunday, August 3, 2008

Cloud Nine Comments

Rating: 4.0

Sometimes I wanna fly away in a dream
and reach to the clouds of oblivion,
So I will never come down to my endless fantasy
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Greenwolfe 1962 03 August 2008

A great title to a poem makes it much easier for the reader. Everyone old 'enough to remember will be familiar with cloud 9. I helps focus the writing and keeps it on track. I won't comment about the contents. Those are controversial enough. I'll just say, well done, to the reader. GW62

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