Saturday, June 14, 2008

****cloud Never Hides The Moon **** Comments

Rating: 3.1

As sky waits to lap up the blue moon in its crown
the shadow still expands by the rolling the clouds
where each speckle of the wind mimes the blue
moment of the time bespeaks in its tone of truth
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Dr subhendu kar
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Thomas Kurkoski 15 October 2008

What a remarkable piece. Very striking in its ability to inspire...tremendous work. I loved it! Cheers, Thomas K

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Patricia Rudolph 19 September 2008

Very peaceful movement, which made for a peaceful moment while reading.. Thank You! I also read several of your other writings... Good Work!

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Rani Turton 20 June 2008

The absolute, true nature of things that is never hidden by illusionary factors, with an astounding phraseology. Thanks for this, Dr. Kar.

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Catherine Rica Cosico 16 June 2008

Another dazzling poem Dr....food for my thoughts. Cate

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Rema Prasanna 14 June 2008

mirage is not true by vision as glaring upon from distance....... expressive write, metaphors beautifully handled, outstanding vocabulary, a wonderful write. Rema

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