Tuesday, January 31, 2017

Cloud Land Mist Prison Banks Comments

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time passes minutes hours sun above clouds shining
above cast down ground cloud land mist prison banks
slow wind breeze soft blows or sun mist fog burning
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Terence George Craddock
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Annette Aitken 01 February 2017

Terry your writing is prolific at the moment I can't keep up lol... but nicely penned. Annette

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Terry Craddock 01 February 2017

short simple poems due to lack of time, but short simple has instant appeal if well written, longer poems take time to layered season, to send roots deep into our psyche

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