Saturday, July 25, 2009

Cloud King Comments

Rating: 4.9

an emperor from heaven
darken the clear blue sky
scatter and form rainwater
wet the dry emerald eyes…
...
Read full text

lady grace
COMMENTS
Roland Bastien 13 August 2009

I felt floating like a cloud when I read that poem....magic-

0 0 Reply
Chris Mendros 04 August 2009

Touching tribute to an undoubtedly fine and gifted son. Mournful but proud, expressing emotions difficult to serve with mere words. Well done.

0 0 Reply
Ken E Hall 02 August 2009

What a nice way to give a tribute to your son with a blessing from heaven for that is what your poem is and to add 3 letters to your name ful, graceful ++++++10 regards

0 0 Reply
Rafique Farooqi 31 July 2009

Very very beautiful...write.........Grace......... Thunderclap in the silence....xinia

0 0 Reply
Aijaz Asif 31 July 2009

another marvelous write from you ma'am and a very beautiful gift a true gift indeed which can never be forgotten and always be remembered....thanks for sharing 10++++ rgds asif

0 0 Reply
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 29 July 2009

Imaginative and very artisitc too.Good job Grace.

0 0 Reply
Shashendra Amalshan 29 July 2009

Oh Happy birth day INDEED! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! this is great my dear Lady Grace...i liked the narrative style you used to here.. sort of entertaining read.. with lvs shan

0 0 Reply
Surya . 28 July 2009

wonderful thoughts.wonderful expression.nice to remember voted10 surya

0 0 Reply
Catrina Heart 27 July 2009

This was a very lovely and sweet tribute composition for your dearest son Adean...Congratulations to both of you my friend...God Bless you always! ! !

0 0 Reply
Rafique Farooqi 27 July 2009

Well written grace........you are wonderful in expressing....

0 0 Reply
DaNa XxX 27 July 2009

that was very nice..! ! ! and touching..! ! God bless you both you and your son..! and let him always be a reason for your proudness...! ! ^__^

0 0 Reply
The Dreamer 26 July 2009

God Bless you both and you will always be looked over - take care

0 0 Reply
Alf Hutchison 26 July 2009

LG a beautiful tribute to your son... wish him God's richest blessings on his birthday from me... regards Alf

0 0 Reply
Carl Harris 26 July 2009

This is a very beautiful and graceful poem tribute to your son, Lady Grace. it is most wonderfully expressed in every verse and was a pleasure to read. Carl.

0 0 Reply

I now how jubilant you must feel Grace with this touching poem. His expression of art and yours as a proud mother seeps through the poem with so much love. Simple beautiful. 10 Karin Anderson

0 0 Reply
Saadat Tahir 26 July 2009

grace...its tangy a pot pouri of mixed feelings....very much life of a standard every day person....generates so nuch emotion and bitter sweet memories of us every day people all prayers for your beloved son may he love his mama just as much and a bit more... well written cheers an ten

0 0 Reply
Subroto Chatterjee 26 July 2009

Very nice....and touching. God bless you and your son. Cheers. Subroto

0 0 Reply
Deborah Cromer 26 July 2009

Very encouraging! Writing this poem in honor is not only a work of art, but also a work of love. Awards out to both of you! Love written and shared is a beautiful gift. DC

0 0 Reply

cloud king as what we call him the name commended in the crowd the winner himself, the champion he is in painting he was so proud.. yes cloud kind or rain whatever call him. is king of all world who brings happiness all over..beautiful theme to beenjoyed for ever...10 read mine raindelay...rain has come...o, merici, raingod..colours

0 0 Reply
Rajaram Ramachandran 25 July 2009

I am also feeling proud of your son's achievement, for whom you have written this beautiful poem. My blessings to your son and your goodself too. I am sure, he will bring more such credits to your family in future also.

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success