Cloud In The Sky Comments

What a poem on love! So different. Exquisite. " tender caress surrendered by the kindle of your embrace. " wow! Myfav

There are plenty of reasons to close my eyes, Pretending to fly. But one that means the most is that. You've become the reason I pray more. Constant whispers that echo in thanks. Transcending through an open door that was once closed. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -Lovely lines of your romantic dream, thanks for sharing.Congrats for being chosen the Poet of the Day.

There are plenty of reasons to close my eyes, pretending to fly. plenty of reasons indeed!

That last line is terrific, a great ending to the poem. Congratulations for having this selected as poem of the day!

floating in the cloud. Nice conceptualization. Congrats on member poem of the Day.

Hi Kewaayne, Congratulations on getting selected Poet of the Day. A well deserved achievement. For this beauty of a poem.

Shades of blue! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A slight whisper..... congrats on being selected....

Content fine. Need to check your rhythms though. Halting in places.

a poem of lovely feelings and intentions, well written.

When we're in love it is like floating on a cloud until it all goes sour. Beautifully put together!