fall with me into the waves
flooding from within
melancholy oversight
seeping through my skin
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This is an excellent piece, , , , , somehow, , , , the music to 'Nights in White Satin' played through my mind while reading this. Amanda, your poetry excelle's with every read of yours that I have the pleasure of reading. Again, excellent work my friend. I am at a sight that I think you would enjoy alot, its (PoetryCastle.org) I am using the same ID, , , Poison9901. If you are by chance looking for a new sight where you may get more recognition, then please by all means come visit us, and if you decide to join, please put me down as reffering you to our sight. I hope to see you there, and if you decide not to join, please by all means, keep sending me the e-mails, you are a growing poet whom I enjoy reading. Take care my friend, and thanks for the excellent read 'Keep on inking the Pages' ~~~Poison~~~
This is wonderfully creative. I find nothing here but the loveliness of prose poetry. GW62