Cloud Cuckoo Land Comments

Great Poem! In the final stanza, I think there's a typo. Should it perhaps be " like birds in a cage" ?

I liked this very much, there are some real touches of class in this poem, a splendid write, I spend much of my time in Cloud Cukkoo Land, and quite like it there :) Peace, Aisha

A delightful read, splendid rhyme. I think I visited this palce before...lol Patricia Gale

Your poem rhymes very well Tim, and is an inspired play on Danny boys poem today on love I believe. Cloud cuckoo land is the only place to be imo. And your last verse is a joyous affirmation of no going back to clouds without loves fluffy cushion indeed. Well done. Just an interpretation! lol fluttering by Tai