Cloud And Stone Comments

What an impressive write. I enjoyed reading this very much. Excellent work!

A very enchanting poem from beginning to end. All the expectations of a young love, yet sadly ending with cold reality. Very imaginative.

The softness of the cloud, hardened by the coldness of the stone...quite the impressive poem! You have mastered the art of storytelling, in this piece....so sad, and touching. I applaud you. I will add this one to my favorites, as it is laced with emotions most can easily relate to...at one time or another....beautifully done! PEACE

an amazing poem..just beyond words..excellent imagination..

Beautiful poem Kanav. Superb ending... he told his mother he had been in love with a stone.. Just loved it.

What a great poem! The story of the impossible love. Perhaps only mother cloud had predicted from the beginning that it would not work out. Fantastic choice of images. I like the idea of clouds loving stones but when the 'in' is added to be in love, suddenly the mission seems to become close to impossible.

Kanav, a fabulous write! The metaphor of Cloud and Stone has opened here the story of hearts.A story of love, unveiling of truth and outburst of emotion is told with intensity.Loved.

A fine piece in the art of symbolic personification, composed with an inborn talent of story-telling... as cloud is a rightly chosen image for the lavish and gentle downpour of soft feelings, while stone is stone-hearted indeed...you developed and then maintained the level of interest till the end...a verse tale writing is not a common art! ! ! very good! ! !

I love this sad but enchanting poem with your amazing imagination that makes cloud and stone so real that we feel cloud's innocence and hurt of finding stone, with another stone making love. Superb write!

its an amazingly beautiful poem.enjoyed it.

An imagination for sure. Well done

wow! wat an imagination my Friend....dis is a unique piece as wel :)

told his mother....he loved a stone on returning back to his cloudy life in a fluffy cotton wrapped life....high up in the skies of your imagination....lovely narrative in verse....two lines too much for the Shakespearean sonnet!

Lines have fallen like water from a silver jar. A tale telling poem from your superb imagination, Kanav.