Wednesday, August 21, 2019

Cloud 9 Closer, Not Far Comments

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If a man's on cloud nine,
He feels farther than pretty fine,
Yet, it's no more such a big deal,
Nor highly elated to feel,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 21 August 2019

A fascinating poem with great rhyme and humor. Very entertaining, Sir. Superbly penned.

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 August 2019

Thank you, in this world getting increasingly sullen day by day, I think humour is a great stress buster. A few happenings every day provide this opportunity to laugh and release tension.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 August 2019

The scentific study's view you have presented with the beauty of motivational power. This poem is very interesting and excellently penned...10

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Aniruddha Pathak 22 August 2019

Thank you indeed dear KM. I should have given some details in Poet's Note, this study was done by Physical Research Laboratory (PRL) . We all feel that the cloud 9 must be far off in stratosphere, but it is actually not so far. And the balloon of cloud 9 is somewhat busted!

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Aniruddha Pathak

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