Thursday, December 21, 2017

Cloud 9 Comments

Rating: 4.7

Cloud 9
So hard it is
To achieve
To be so high
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Lyn Paul
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Khairul Ahsan 14 May 2020

'We grow from every fall' - this line is a great inspiration. Thank you.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 10 May 2019

Yes we grow taller from a fall ESP if we think as positively as your great awesome uplifting poem suggests and inspires. Life is cloud 9, cloudburst and hail too. Kudos. Had to read more from u before I disappear into life. Take care.

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Jennifer Birchall 10 March 2019

This is a very inspiring poem Lyn. Some of our greatest lessons have come from being knocked down, we get back up a little stronger.

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 February 2018

We grow from every fall! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Unwritten Soul 18 February 2018

Yes we climb and fall and again reached to higher place again..i feel smiling reading it, it just so easy to capture the words, then the mood and then look at the picture...such a cloud nine to make us smile.

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Yiyan Han 21 January 2018

PS....................10!

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Yiyan Han 21 January 2018

An inspiring piece Of aiming high in clouds Yet sometimes we can just be happy Down a little at Cloud 8 ;)

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 January 2018

Achieving anything high is really impossible but this can be possible with effort and hard work. Strong trust on self courage is definitely necessary. We can grow and with endless possibilities we can touch the height. Having high hope is necessary in life. This poem carries deep theme. Thanks for sharing this...10

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Bri Edwards 05 January 2018

i think i would combine all of the last eight lines into one long stanza. :) It's a very optimistic poem. i am tempted to go outside NOW and fall down a few times! ! ! it sounds like the right thing to do. but it is cool outside and getting dark, sooooooo i think i'll just go to the basement stairwell (the top) , turn on the light, and FaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaLLLLLLLLLLL. CRASH! i can feel myself growiNG NoW! ! ! to MyPoemList. bri :)

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David Wood 28 December 2017

We have to be ready to bounce back like a rubber ball. Lovely poem Lyn.

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Tony Karas 25 December 2017

Indeed we do learn from every fall. Or we should. Well written my friend.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 December 2017

Lyn, such an inspiring poem👍👍👍

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