Saturday, July 27, 2013

Cloud Comments

Rating: 5.0

Today or tomorrow
I'll be a cloud
and will hover above
your house..
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Neela Nath Das
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Patricia Grantham 03 August 2013

Clouds of blue that turns to gray rains down love to nurture the soul just like the water nurtures the earth. We need both to survive. Nicely expressed.

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Dinesan Madathil 27 July 2013

What an optimistic assurance have you made sir! Excellent rendering indeed. Awaiting to read more and more similar poems....

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 27 July 2013

a simple wish beautifully expressed!

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