Thursday, November 19, 2009

Cloud Comments

Rating: 5.0

With smiles cloud walked
All along my life path
Restless me, restless cloud
Moved, poured and walked
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Louis Rams 26 November 2009

beautifully written! last verse for me says it all. a ten

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 26 November 2009

Wonderful poem. Nice to read. Keep it up, Kranthi.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 19 November 2009

A fantastic poem to read. A nice write.

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Marieta Maglas 19 November 2009

wonderful simile: ''Nights or days not mattered Like a divine bond it stayed'' wonderful descriptive poem, lovely rhymes 10++++++++++

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Joseph Poewhit 19 November 2009

Title fits the poem well - cloud.

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Eyan Desir 19 November 2009

Nice flow of words good write...

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