I see along the horizon, a distant cloud,
still, with a sense of contentment,
So purely white,
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a simple cloud wid all the beauties of the universe... lovely..! !
wow very touching really it brought tears to my eyes....thanks a lot for sharing
Very touchy & simple on the face of cloud. you are a great poet. keep it up. Happy new year2009 to you & your dear ones.
An unknown destiny, Just a simple cloud. very touching, how real mean it is thanks for writting like this
Your poems have a peacefulness to them, that was what I was trying to say in the last comment, but since is (barely 5 am) my brain hasn't woken with the rest of the body.
I liked the pristine beauty and simplicity of your poem. U get 10++
Great poem...well thought out and executed...for being so young, you're very talented. Keep writing! -Michael
so much said in so little words bout clouds........... wonderful poetry composed........