Tuesday, May 12, 2015

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Let pride be damned this once
And then be damned again, and again
Until my peace be returned to me
And my soul is fully assuaged
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Osazee Dankaro
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Osazee Dankaro 21 November 2020

Wow. Reading this again for the first time five years later. I really cannot believe I wrote this, nor can I understand the depth from which the words emanated. Really nice.

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Rajnish Manga 23 August 2017

Exceptionally beautiful articulation. Adversity affects but it cannot take away the spring of life. Crows who feigned ignorance at my birth And cawed in jubilation at my demise I seek the hand of my murderers / So long as I get a good night’s sleep.

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Osazee Dankaro 25 August 2017

Thank you Raj. I really really do appreciate you.

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Chinedu Dike 12 May 2015

Well articulated piece of poetry, insightfully penned with conviction. Good night's sleep means peace of mind which is a continued Xmas. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Osazee Dankaro 12 May 2015

Thank you so much

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