Closure Comments

closure is a true life tale expertly portrayed in poetic form. well done 10/10

Enunciation of love through its critical pathways and poetic emancipation of thoughts..special mention these verses as such You are sweet and then you are sour You saying all this lies to me and I can see right through you

i love this poem because it has a very deep meaning and its something we all go through at some point of time.. And its amazing you wrote this because it will give other people a chance, who are going through the same thing, to read this and get inspired to do something about it.. very good job.. When you have time please do read my new poem (One voice) .. i would really appreciate it

Nice flow with words and emotion, funny, sad and deep at the same time 'You such control freak', that cracked me up ;) great release ;)