Monday, November 9, 2009

Closing The Windows Comments

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it is dark, you keep on saying
what i see is otherwise
it is a broad day and the sun is brightly shining
the flowers are abloom
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Suki Nakamura
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Padmapriya Boddapati 15 November 2009

It is closing the windows around your soul that puts it into darkness. You have managed to convey something very sublime very simply.Keep up the good work.

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