Sunday, September 10, 2006

Closing The Door Comments

Rating: 5.0

You're asking me to give up everything
To take a leap of faith -
Sail into uncharted waters
Where there may be dragons........
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Linda Ori
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Not a member No 4 24 February 2007

Yeah, this is as good as it gets - a dream, no more, for many of us. It's a dream we want to live though. But impetuosity fades a bit, and sometimes we don't take the plunge when we should. It's either this or 'what if'. A fine portrayal of the important things that love has to offer, plus an astute insight into a particular state of mind. Great work. xxx

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Nimal Dunuhinga 12 October 2006

Beautiful! .........closing the door with an open heart how sad it seems?

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Jerry Hughes 25 September 2006

Amazing poem Linda, beautifully expressed...

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Catastrophe King 17 September 2006

Linda... I am magically amazed by the composition here. You have created an aura of pssionate love here...... this is going to stay with us a long time behind those closed doors. EXCELLENT WRITE.

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Alison Cassidy 15 September 2006

Linda, trust me, it's scary but its worth it - one hundredfold. What does Neale say? What would love do? Well love has written this - and so sweetly. Bless you, fair maiden. love, Allie xxxxxxxxxxx

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Debora Short 10 September 2006

Good Morning, Linda Close that door...dragons can be sweetly magical...while time honored black and white realities sometimes dress tyrannical~~~enjoy that sweetness! Blessings ~ Debora

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Geoff Warden 10 September 2006

Linda I like the flow of this poem, and the message bang on, so close that door and move forward...............Great rite....

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Krishna Dasani 10 September 2006

hey linda....... another good one.... hey i m liking the flow of your work....... good going lady............ smiles, krishna

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Herbert Nehrlich1 10 September 2006

Simply brilliant, Linda. Such a pleasant, unpretentious read. Reads like light fare with an agenda. Best H

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