Wednesday, September 21, 2011

Closing The Blinds Comments

Rating: 2.0

little dirty faced boy
in the parking lot
in the rain...
no coat, no shoes...
...
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Eric Cockrell
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Vipins Puthooran 21 September 2011

Excellent writing, //sitsdown to read the Bible// the last line and //the title// have so many meanings..great poem

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Ashley Bachtel 21 September 2011

Awe... That's sad but really good.

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