Closing Ranks Comments

Something extra is needed to describe what occurs When we know ranks are closing. They say not a word. But the feeling of stifle permeates air. It's silent effusion is spread everywhere. closing in ranks and forgetting al the differences... beautiful and vivid description.. good write...10 read mine disparity... individual...no separate ways...

I class myself as a bit of a 'people watcher' and there is a lot of truth contained in these words. Spot on!

I will echo Toms remarks and say this is a really great poem both in writing and content. Fay what you have written here needs to be said and then some more. No speak solves nought and is a catalyst for all the trouble in this wonderful world of ours. Well done. Bob

Flawless in it's message and thought... Great poem.

A great poem and o so true, loved this one, well done again Fay regards Tom