Closing My Year. - 08 Comments
Looking backside of an outgoing year,
Momentous events show destiny's
Face has bravely unfolded a brand new
And exciting rhythm for me. Clearly
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cast out the old and bring on the new, an age old theme freshly expressed. good write.
Ah! what a breath of fresh air to find this. This is my first reading of any of your works and now I'll go and bury myself in their inviting embrace! 'Face has bravely unfloded a brand new And exciting rhythm for me.' Yes, that's exactly what this poem does to me - shows me a whole new face in this 'still enrticingly' new year. I'll drink full of the strength pouring out of this wite. 10 all the way
what a nice year closing! You are talented babe......it dont have the rhyme but it has tempo....good peice.......! Mmmmwaaaah
I like the variable rhyme scheme you constructed here, Fay, as well as your inventive & 'original' opening line, which carries the poem, and its positive message of hopeful, auspicious genisis, for the new year herenow, in motion..Solid Work, young lady from Cornwall, U.K....and directly on the other side of the Ocean we share! ...And from where i live...just 90 miutes from Cornwall, New York...Home of The Baseball Hall of Fame, where i met the famous Willie Mays, some 25 years ago! F j R 2009
Hi Fay: Bring on the year... Toward's heart so dear. Full bloom... Let it be free of sadness and gloom. This new year will come and pass... May the prices of oil be low on gas. This year will travel through the clock of time and the ages... Hopefully to all there will be many happy stages. No future of terrorismal acts be done.... An economy in full swing begun it's run. Recovery will require sacrifice from all... This in turn in the end, will forstall, our final breaking fall. Great poem Fay-Gave it a ten! God bless all poets-MJG.
Eloquent and powerful. Your passion shines through in it. A rather gripping poem with very intense flow and wording. Kudos Fay! A very good one.10
What a wonderful outlook you have on life Fay, may 2009 be everything you want it to be, I look forward to reading more of your poetry, Lynda xx 10
May the sun shine on you for 2009 Fay..Unlike last year when we all got webbed feet, Best wishes for the new year. Sid xxx
A toast to the year that has past and a drink for the year to come….nicely penned…enjoyed the read…..Happy New Year and best wishes to you my friend. Scott
This fine poem has a depth of spiritual maturity and an optimism that is uplifting. Methinks I spy the Tarot between your lines. Well written and thoroughly worthwhile. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
An enjoyable write and toast to the new year. Well done, Fay. Best wishes to you for a great new year. Richard
Very inspiring, Fay. I like what you see from your own personal window on the world. May 2009 be kind to you. Love, Sandra
your command of language is to marvel at. You have a very strong voice in your work, i know this is an overused saying, but sometimes when reading the works of others you can almost hear thier voice reading the poem to you. This is a lovely poem rich with lines that will stay with me long into 2009 best regards my friend Vincent
.. and to you, and your poetry, Fay...a wish for a rich and full year. Michael
Well Fay, fate delt me a bad hand yesterday, but hey thats life Happy new year.. Andy 10
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8/4/2025 1:39:15 AM # 1.0.0
Can't believe I missed one Fay A lovely way to end the year....