Friday, December 28, 2007

Closing My Eye’s Comments

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Seeing no reason why, I close my
eye’s and walk home not
wonting to fight. Pretending the
stars are made of tin I can see
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David Blake
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Chris Higginson 28 December 2007

I suppose that the spelling mistakes and the grammar are part of the imagery, but it confuses me, I'm afraid.

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Nathaniel Ranostay 28 December 2007

great poem! love the imagery!

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