Wednesday, April 2, 2008

Closing Door And The Distance To Pain Comments

Rating: 5.0

We chattered for hours in hope and glee
Friends sharing novel beginnings as the night passed free
I don’t know now the words to come next…
My pen stops, as I wonder how things progressed
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Cyrina Moon 30 September 2009

You nimbly massage each thought. You freely evoke, yet equivocate each emotion. You carefully measure the worth of each word. Life is encased in hard edged stuff but I seek a soft center to survive. You're a handsome lad.

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Francois Hoon

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